I have an essay needs to correct the grammatical errors?

I edited your essay and sent it to the email you provided. I hope it helps! The one thing I didn't change was your citations. If your source was a book you would need the author's name and page number only. Ex. (DiCarlo 45). If your source was an article you would just use the title of the article. Ex. (Buyer Beware). But, I don't know if you were taught another way. Good luck! Have a good day :)