I have an essay needs to correct the grammatical errors?

I edited your essay and sent it to the email you provided. I hope it helps! The one thing I didn't change was your citations. If your source was a book you would need the author's name and page number only. Ex. (DiCarlo 45). If your source was an article you would just use the title of the article. Ex. (Buyer Beware). But, I don't know if you were taught another way. Good luck! Have a good day :)

Why is it when the "BUSH TAX CUT" is about to expire Republicans forget about the deficit?

I give a **** about the deficit. We need money and we're barely making it. We're not welfare libbs or rich libbs, we're the working Americans that the Democrats live to **** over.

New sports that the whole family can enjoy?

As you may now know Cad is as depraved(some have even said a tiny bit more)as the next person.If you are an consenting adult do what ever you wish,with each other (I find it makes it a bit fairer on the girlies if there are 3 or more)as what harm does it do.There is only one subject Cad will not tolerate, thats child molesters.As they have no place on this planet I have devised a new sport one which we play most weekends at Cad towers.Hunt the paedo.This is played on horse back(ofcourse) you need a pack of hounds,most of us have a pack or two here in the country side.A high powered hunting rifle, you city kids can bring your hand guns, but they don't have the range.Rules are simple paedo gets 5 minute head start(gives me enough time for a maid)then you let the dogs go.When shooting a paedo you must never kill them(points deducted for this) as the dogs much prefer to tear up a living thing.If we lose a few innocent people on the way so be it its a small price to pay dont you agree?

Will you Republicans thank the Tea Party for all your victories, you rode on our collective back?

the whole of the GOP would be smart to listen to the Tea Party, because it represents the real America

There was a new girl at school who was just beautiful and then the next day she never showed up ever again hlp?

wow... weird.. is she sick?hem... maybe u should ask the school nurse/some1.. tell her that she's ur old friend and ure wondering what happened to her.. just ask :)

Are Panties No Longer Fashionable?

It seem as though women no longer believe that undergarments are fashionable. I work part time in an upscale clothing store, the women that come in seem to not have panties on, I don't get it. Come on ladies we are women we do leak bodily fluids. I don't care how many baths, showers you take, you are going to leak and you do have a slight odor. Then these women come in and try on clothing with out having underwear on. Yuck! Can some one please explain why would you want to go commando, and if you do choose not have panties on, why?

Can anyone translate this into Spanish?

mi mejor amiga se llama veronica. tiene 17 anos. la conozco desde el neuve grado. tiene cabello caffee y ojos caffee. su color favorita es rosita. le gusta vestir con ropa escoces. ella es una persona susia. tiene un coche y trabaja en Chill Bubble Tea. tiene un perro gordo que se llama pogo. ella le encata harry potter y su caracter favorita es snape